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8/3/2013

Describe the evil ruler, the BATTLE and how you beat the ruler by working together.
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What was the quest object which gave the ruler their power?
What did you see, hear and sense in the final battle?
Did the ruler's minions fight you as well?
Did your guide or magical helpers come to assist you?
How did your weapons work?
After the ruler was killed, who was crowned ruler?
How did the people or creatures of the kingdom react after the ruler was gone?
Did you all return to your own worlds?
What was your farewell like?

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Isaac - Part 1

8/5/2013 09:31:23 pm

The saddle was quite comfortable-just like a couch actually. It was rather fun riding the sloth thing, until it was my turn to do the steering-I crashed a few times, so we decided to give the steering position to Gabe. Suddenly, a beast appeared-this time it was armoured and equipped with a long sword. “I’ll handle it” Shouted Gabe, who courageously jumped off and slammed his axe into the ground, pushing the beast back. He then knocked the beast back and stabbed it; the creature then turned into black ash.
“Well get a move on Gabe. We don’t have all day- in fact it is almost dark. Let’s travel another km then set up camp,” I said.

We did travel another km, unpacked the tents given to us and had a good sleep.

We awoke in the morning to find that our ride had run off as we had forgotten to tie it down. “I guess it is only about 2kms away-It’s not that far away.” I said, trying to brighten this moment. Though we were all a bit annoyed we continued. We eventually got there. We took slow steps. We heard the occasional footstep. Then we saw it, the beautiful Emerald House. It was larger than you would expect (a proper house). We entered the house. A door suddenly opened revealing a beast. “Sophia, you crawl under the beast- we’ll distract it.” It knocked me back. It was about to kill me when an arrow went through its heart. I looked back to see Gabe with a bow. I walked over to him and looked in an open cupboard-it was filled with weapons. “Sophia, have you got it.”
“Just about to- ah, got it.”
Suddenly all of the houses shattered. “Quickly hold up the dagger!” Gabe shouted. Sophia held up the dagger and the birds all turned to ashes.
“That was easy.” I said, soon regretting it as a giant spacecraft broke through the ground, a hatch on the top in which we were concealed. An armoured soldier then knocked me out.

Isaac - Part 2

8/5/2013 09:42:40 pm

When I awoke I was in the presence of the same man who gave us our quest. “So you actually went on that wild goose chase I set up for you. Look, my real name is Typho, Admiral Typho. I work for the mighty lord. Let me explain things to you: You were sent here because your parents led a rebellion on this world, with you in captivity, in our position we can threaten them to turn themselves over. Right now we are exiting a dome or fake planet, there are a few of these.” He said to me.
“Why did you send us on that quest?” Gabe said.
“Because I can!” he shouted. “And you know else I can do: Guard, execute the ones called Gabe and Sophia - The Lord only wants Ryan!”
“NO!” I shouted, but it was too late - they were gone forever.
. . .
Soon I was right in front of the ‘Lord’. “Ah, Ryan I see my little dog has finally caught the cat.” He said “Your friends are nothing, well at least now!” he laughed.
“You will pay.” I said and screamed. Suddenly, I noticed I was catching fire –Typho must not have lied about the powers, I was getting angry, my fire was melting the chains, my fire was getting bigger and suddenly I threw a ball of fire at the lord, pushing him back. I then broke straight through the roof and into a large spacecraft, though I felt absolutely no pain.
I flew over the world for a long time, every time I saw a fake world destroying it in my rage. The world was mostly sea with islands and continents. Suddenly, I saw an island burning and slowly getting absorbed by a sea of soldiers, I flew down in front of the soldiers that stopped for a second but then charged. I knocked one back, turned around and belted another, but there were too many. I flew upwards about 100 meters above them. I then charged straight down and punched the ground sending a massive wave outwards knocking them into the ocean. For a while, I flew right above the sea when I flew past a man fighting an armoured beast. I stopped and turned back. I then flew straight back, grasped the beast and thrashed it into the ocean. I flew back to him. “Thank you!” He said. “I am Robert, I am part of the rebellion. The lord’s men killed the rest of my team. Are you one of them?”
“No, of course not!” I replied. “Can you take me to the rebellion?”
“Yes, most definitely!” We started to walk.
“I am Ryan, my parents led the rebellion.”
“Oh, your parents-they are dead, they were killed recently by the stricken.”
Soon I was right in front of the ‘Lord’. “Ah, Ryan I see my little dog has finally caught the cat.” He said “Your friends are nothing, well at least now!” he laughed.
“ You will pay.” I said and screamed. Suddenly I noticed I was catching fire –Typho must not have lied about the powers, I was getting angry, my fire was melting the chains, my fire was getting bigger and suddenly I threw a ball of fire at the lord, pushing him back. I then broke straight through the roof and into a large spacecraft, though I felt absolutely no pain.
I flew over the world for a long time, every time I saw a fake world destroying it in my rage. The world was mostly sea with islands and continents. Suddenly, I saw an island burning and slowly getting absorbed by a sea of soldiers, I flew down in front of the soldiers that stopped for a second but then charged. I knocked one back, turned around and belted another, but there were too many. I flew upwards about 100 meters above them. I then charged straight down and punched the ground sending a massive wave outwards knocking them into the ocean. For a while, I flew right above the sea when I flew past a man fighting an armoured beast. I stopped and turned back. I then flew straight back, grasped the beast and thrashed it into the ocean. I flew back to him. “Thank you!” He said. “I am Robert, I am part of the rebellion. The lord’s men killed the rest of my team. Are you one of them?”
“No, of course not!” I replied. “Can you take me to the rebellion?”
“Yes, most definitely!” We started to walk.
“I am Ryan, my parents lead the rebellion.”
“Oh, your parents-they are dead, they were killed recently by the stricken.”
“Who are these ‘stricken’?”
“The beast you killed earlier, that is one. There are many of them. Many years ago the lord was losing many men. So he then found this highly superior race. Your father was one of these, but he was on our side. This is where you get your powers, though yours are greater than theirs because you simply use yours for the right side. The stricken has a powerful leader; his name is Torak Malamere-he was one of the original stricken, which gives him extreme power. He killed your parents.”
“Then he shall pay.”

Isaac - Part 3

8/5/2013 09:47:37 pm

“No, you cannot let your anger consume you. If you do you will be destroyed in your rage. “We walked for about another hour over islands, then finally we found the door. “Look, here we are.” Robert said, while opening a door that was covered in red vines that matched the trees around us. We went inside. There was an underground metal passage that was shaped like a hexagon. There were no torches until the occasional underground campsite. We had to walk for about a week, stopping in the campsites on the sides, sleeping whenever (in short periods) we wanted as there was no day or night down there. Eventually we got to a hatch. We opened it and went inside. It was like a giant crater filled with small huts and space fighters. “Ryan. I will take you to the elder council, they will decide your fate.” Robert said. We walked through the village. The children were gathering around me and following me, but as soon as we passed two armoured guards they fled home. The guards were in full body armour and equipped with triangular rifles.
“Where are you going to?” One stepped forward and asked.
“We are going to the elder council.” Robert replied.
“Very well. This way please.” The guard escorted us to the elder council. We entered a large hut, which was made out of timber unlike the rest that were made out of mud.
“Leave us.” Said the man in the centre of the circle to the guard.
“Who are you?” He asked me.
“I am Ryan, son of your old leaders.” I replied.
“Ryan, let me first explain our current position. These are the remaining humans on this world, the rest are on the planet Techna IV; this planets twin. In about 2 years, if we have not defeated the lord we will leave to that planet too.”
“You honour, may I ask who this ‘lord’ is.”
“Many hundreds of years ago there was a spacecraft that landed on Earth-this spacecraft belonged to the Raka(the race that kindly let us live on their world, Techna IV). Many humans saw this spacecraft, so in order to not disturb Earths fate they were forced to take all of the humans that knew of their existence to their own home world. Fortunately, their world has oxygen in its atmosphere. Most of us chose to stay with them, but some discovered the stricken and joined them. One of the humans defeated the stricken leader and now he rules them. Even the old leaders son, Torak Malamere serves him but we all know that one day he will betray the lord, but we do not know if that will be good or bad.”
There was a sudden bang followed by screams. Then after a few seconds half the council hut was blown to pieces. I looked outside to find a few enemy fighters shooting at the village. Suddenly a large space cruiser flew right over us blasting the fighters into pieces. “I turned around and looked at the leader of the council.
“That was the Raka who just saved our skins again” He said.
“Sir, you haven’t yet told me my fate.”I asked.
“Oh your fate is sealed, when you are old enough you must lead this rebellion.”
2 years passed of war and chaos.

Isaac - Part 4

8/5/2013 09:52:31 pm

I now lead the rebellion against the evil lord. We have struggled and lost many men but still, some of us remain-trying to defeat this criminal.
I woke up in the morning, remembering this was the day that both Sophia and Gabe died on last year, when I lost Robert to Torak Malamere. I got dressed and went outside. “Good morning Connor.” I said to my new friend, who I had met after Robert’s death. He helped me get through it and forget. I have not forgotten though.
“Morning!” He replied. “We should get ready for leaving to Techna IV. I mean, it’ s not like we’ll defeat him in the next week or so.”
“I need to see the elder council. Something isn’t right.”
“Well, come on then.”
We walked over to the guards, but this time they just moved to the side. I was about to open the door when I saw two men up on the edge of the crater. I couldn’t tell who it was, but then I realized: it was an enemy soldier. Hundreds more were behind them. They all charged straight down trampling all over the villagers and houses. They ran right over us. I started to burn, then threw a fireball straight out of me. I then flew up, but there were too many of them. Every year on this day something bad happens, something terrible. I turned around and saw a man on the other side of the crater. He looked about 40, was slightly bearded and he wore armour like my own. I flew over to him and said, “Who are you and what are you doing here?”
“Oh you don’t need to know that all you need to know is to follow this map.” That is all he said and he was gone.
I picked up the map and had a look. It was telling me to go back to the red island that the tunnel started on. I took a giant boost upwards, giving me a fantastic view of the islands. I took another giant boost, but this time straight at the island. I landed heavily, creating a massive wave outwards. The map led right to the entrance to the tunnels, but with a rotation symbol on it. I tried turning the pop-up entrance, but it didn’t rotate. So I then went and looked around the other side: there was another door. I jumped inside. There was a hallway with weapons covering the sides. I walked along it, but there was a dead end. An amazing axe was at the end of the hallway. I decide to grab it, but it only came out part of the way. I pushed it back in, but instead of pushing straight back into the wall it pushed the wall back like a door. I then saw him, the same man as before.
“Greetings, my name is Hunter. I know you have an enemy, the stricken. You may think you are strong enough to fight them, but you are not. If you wish I could give you a chance and train you.” He said.
“Yes, I would love to learn, but how can I trust you!” I said cautiously.
“Because I knew your father and fought beside him. That is why you should trust me and I know all that has happened to you.”
“I will train with you then, but first I will need a rest.”
“You can rest after you train! Now punch the wall beside you!”
I did as he said and started punching the wall beside me.
“Think of Gabe and Sophia, what about Robert and Connor, the rebellion!” He shouted, obviously trying to make me angry and encourage me. The wall was beginning to crack and dent. It suddenly broke, revealing a room. “That is your room, now go outside and get some resources to make a door. Oh, and while you’re at, make some dinner!”
I trained for months.

Isaac - Part 5

8/5/2013 09:54:47 pm

I woke up in the morning and got out of bed. Today I had fruit for breakfast.
“Ryan!” I heard Hunter call. “Time for training.”
I stopped eating and ran over to him.
“Hunter, what is my task today?”
“Today, you must learn the most important task: to become a shadow. You must learn to be quick. And to be silent.” He explained. “Step one: Jump into the attic, through that hole. Propel off the wall.”
I jumped to the wall, but missed the hatch. I then had another go, this time went through the hatch. “That was too loud. Learn to utilise your powers and limit them.”
I had several goes and did multiple things like that.
• • •
“This is your new armour.” Hunter showed me a black version of my old armour that had multiple extra gadgets, such as grapple hooks, pop-out blasters an upgraded version of my spear that was double bladed. I got the armour on and it locked into place. I then placed my spear in its holster, which was on my back. I started to notice that his television screen was turning on and twitching.
It suddenly turned on. “Ryan, I am your new ‘lord’. This old one was nothing and he paid for killing my father! He is no more. I am looking forward to our face off- if you have the courage.”
“Ryan. We are leaving to the Raka home world tomorrow.”
We had dinner and woke up in the morning. I had no breakfast this morning. “Follow me,” Hunter said as he pressed a button, opening a new door that revealed a small spacecraft. “My ship has a cloaking device so we can get through Malamere’s forces. Hop in.”
I got in the spacecraft. Hunter pressed a button and the ship started to hum. He then pressed two more, which took us into the air. He slid his finger across a screen- that made us invisible.
. . .
We were soon In front of the Raka High Council. Hunter stepped forward and spoke- “We are here to warn you about an attack, led by Torak Malamere.”
“And why should we believe you.” Said the leader.
“ Because Ryan here, is the son of the mighty Drake Skylink, and to disrespect him would be to disrespect Drake.”
“How many soldiers are we talking here?”
“One hundred thousand, I have seen them.” I said.
The leader pressed a button and said “General, make sure all forces are focused on protecting our home world.”
. . .
I was put in the same suit of armour, but this time I had a helmet to protect my face. I was standing right outside the temple of the High Council, when a Spacecraft landed right in front of us and out walked Torak Malamere, followed by a huge army of The Stricken, armoured and ready for war.
“If you do not surrender I will be forced to destroy you.”
“We will not surrender to a monster like you.”
“Fine.” He said pulling out a large sword. I pulled out my spear and blocked his strike. “General, attack!” Two more spacecraft landed and out charged thousands of soldiers. “My forces are going to destroy this city no matter what you do. It will not matter if you kill me this city will be destroyed.” He said and flew straight up into space. I followed. “Do you see this, Ryan.” He said pointing at a large mechanical ship. “This will create a portal which this world will be sucked into. Its power source is through the portal and anyone who travels in there and destroys the power source will not come back as the portal will close them off. Oh, you are not actually thinking of doing that. Even if you do, you will leave this world with me and it will be destroyed.”
“I found something out about you. Your people can be destroyed in an instant. Inside your ship is the source of your species’ life. If I destroy that, I destroy you.” I said and then flew straight down to the ship, I then flew straight inside the command ship.” Malamere was right behind me.
“You do realize that you will be destroyed, as your father was one of us.”

Isaac - Part 6

8/5/2013 10:02:04 pm

“Only purebloods are affected.”
“No!” he shouted, while I ripped the source apart. I looked outside the army had been turned to ashes, but not Malamere.
“I am no pure blood, I am not even one of The Stricken.” He said laughing. “Your father was one my species, in fact he still is. Ryan, everything you have been told was a lie. Your father leads us. Come, and join your father.”
“You may be the same species as me, but that doesn’t make you a hero.”
I pulled out a blade jabbed it straight through his chest. “This planet will be destroyed.” and those were his last words.
I turned my head to see the portal was getting larger and closer. I tried to think of a way that I would be able to survive, but it seemed there was no way that I could. I flew straight into it. There were a lot of destroyed objects in there- as if a ship had been ripped apart and sucked in. Maybe they had used this to clear their own battlefields. A large piece of metal moved, revealing the core. The core was large and shaped like a sphere, but had many wires coming of it and into large battery like power sources. I then ripped it apart, and turned around. The portal was closing…

Anica

8/9/2013 10:26:37 pm

Gemma here, again – it was cold and dewy on the day of the final battle. We were heading towards the evil queen’s castle. We could see the ugly bronze gates on the horizon. The sun was rising and sunlight spilt across all of the hills that surrounded the castle. When we got to the gates. There was something big inside the gate. It said Chevy in red fancy writing. “Ugly name, Chevy. Is she the ruler of this land?” I asked. “Yes,” said the donkey. “But the evil ruler. You will be trying to defeat her.”

Fairies were patrolling the tall, ugly gates. “Same plan as last time, only remember camouflage,” whispered the donkey, nodding his head at Vanessa and in my direction. We split, looking back at each other, exchanging nervous glances. After about half an hour later, I came to some open gates. I crept into the bronze gates. The garden gnome queen was standing at the top of some brick stairs. She was short and stubby. She wore red everything, a red strap less dress, red lipstick and she even wore red stilettoes. She had brown curly hair and had a very strange face. Very pointy at some parts...
I snuck behind the castle and walked inside the back door. The queen was coming into the castle. She saw me. ”Get her!” yelled Chevy. An army of little biting fairies charged at me. I jumped down the stairs and yelled, “Fly”. I was soaring through the air. I was flying towards the gate, all the fairies behind me. Suddenly, I flew upwards, but all the fairies crashed down and died.
I ran into the brown brick castle and saw Vanessa fighting the gnome. Chevy had no hair! It looked ridiculous. We pulled out the jar with the allergy dust. We sprinkled it all over Chevy. She was sneezing so much her face screwed up and looked like she was 100 years old. We squeezed orange juice in her eyes. Vanessa shot her with fire and I shot her with ice. She froze with flames on her bald head. “We did it! We froze her!” we yelled. “But I would have loved her hair and lippy”, I said in a rather loud voice, gasping for air every now and then. But then the ice smashed. The melting ice put out the flames on her head. Chevy was even angrier. “What do we do?” I asked in a very scared voice. I got out my bow and arrow and aimed at Chevy but I missed by a centimetre and hit a photo of her great great great great grandmother and the glass smashed - then the photo froze. Vanessa tried to shoot her with fire but missed by an inch and hit a tree outs ide. We sprinted outside onto the orange paved ground…

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